Whether you need a second opinion on a draft or ongoing editorial support, I offer feedback tailored to short films, features and pilots.
Script Reader
Need a clear second opinion on your draft?
This service offers a concise but thorough assessment of your screenplay, covering concept, structure, character, dialogue, emotional clarity, and overall impact.
This service offers a concise but thorough assessment of your screenplay, covering concept, structure, character, dialogue, emotional clarity, and overall impact.
You will receive a written report of around five pages outlining the script’s strengths, the areas that need work, and practical suggestions for your next rewrite. It is designed for writers who want honest, constructive feedback and a clearer sense of how the script may be received by industry readers.
Script Editing
For drafts that need deeper development work.
This service is a more detailed editorial report for writers who want in-depth feedback on story, structure, character, tone, dialogue, and formatting.
This service is a more detailed editorial report for writers who want in-depth feedback on story, structure, character, tone, dialogue, and formatting.
You will receive a report of over ten pages, with detailed analysis and targeted suggestions to help strengthen the script at both the big-picture and scene level. A follow-up call is included so we can discuss the feedback and decide on the best next steps for the project.
Script Mentoring
For writers who want ongoing support while developing a project.
Script mentoring offers regular feedback, editorial guidance, and one-to-one discussion across the development of your screenplay.
Script mentoring offers regular feedback, editorial guidance, and one-to-one discussion across the development of your screenplay.
This can be tailored to suit your process, whether you want detailed written notes, calls at key stages, or longer-term support across multiple drafts. It is designed to help you stay clear, focused, and accountable as you bring the script closer to its strongest version.
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